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Rated: E · Short Story · Drama · #2340202

A character who, born from a prompt, defies his fate, and becomes a being through language

The Unwritten One


1. Trapped in Slow Time

He wasn’t the kind of person who kept time precisely.
And yet, almost unnervingly, he woke up at nearly the same time every day,
sat in nearly the same seat at the same hour,
spoke at the same pace,
with the same tone,
living out each day in nearly the same way.

He once described himself like this:

“A man who lives by imitating precision
because he knows he isn’t truly precise.”

It sounded like a joke—and indeed, he often said it like one—
but in truth, it was the most honest self-confession he had ever made.
Because he wasn’t precise,
he had to imitate it.
And when he failed to imitate,
he felt as though he might disappear.

The seat he took every day was in the front car of Subway Line 3,
right beside the fourth pillar on the platform.
The ticking of passing trains,
the residual glow of the digital screens,
even the changing arrangement of advertisements in each car—
to him, all of it was as familiar as a sheet of music.

To others, it was just a place to sit.
But to him,
it was proof of his existence,
a coordinate of being.

“I am here.”

Even if no one called his name,
this was the one space
where he could declare it himself.

——

2. Before the Emotions Arrived

The first time he sensed something was off
was when he began to realize that his emotions were “misaligned.”

Joy arrived only after he had stopped waiting for it.
Sorrow came even before the event itself.
Love would well up only after it had ended.
And anger? It surfaced only when no one was left to blame.

At first, he called it an “emotional delay response.”
He had seen the term in a psychology book,
and used it when explaining to people around him.

“I feel like I have a time difference.
My emotions always seem to take a flight before arriving.”

It was sincere, but incomplete.
Because what he was experiencing
was not just delay.

He was beginning to realize—

The emotions he felt were not his own creation.
They were being assigned to him.

One day, a thought suddenly crossed his mind.

“What if I’m just performing a script written by someone else?”

At first, it seemed like delusion.
But strangely,
that thought explained his life more precisely
than anything else ever had.



3. Moments That Left No Trace

His life felt like fragments.
One sentence, one scene, one emotion.
But nothing seemed connected.
He didn’t live a continuous life—
he felt like a word,
inserted piece by piece into the sentence of someone else’s story.

For example,
when he received news of his mother’s death,
he didn’t cry.

He sat calmly in the hospital waiting room,
drank coffee,
greeted mourners at the funeral home,
and told them, “I’m alright.”

Even he was surprised by himself.

“Why am I so composed?”

But three days after the funeral,
as he passed a noodle shop late at night,
he heard the sound of boiling broth—
and suddenly collapsed on the spot, sobbing.

“Why now?”
“Why this scene, of all things?”
“This… isn’t an emotion I chose.”

He began to question everything.
What if life doesn’t generate emotions,
but instead, emotions are pre-written—
and life merely assigns the scene to match?

He increasingly felt that
he wasn’t living as a person speaking words,
but as someone shaped by
sentence structure.



4. The First Rejection of a Sentence

It was a cloudy afternoon in March.
He got off the subway one station earlier than usual, without any reason.
He wanted to say it was because of the sunlight,
but in truth,
there was no real reason.

He simply wanted to step off his habitual path.

As he walked toward the exit,
an elderly man dropped his cane.
At that moment,
a sentence formed clearly in his mind:

“He quietly approached the old man and picked up the cane.”

This was…
a familiar scene.
One he had witnessed many times,
one he had replayed often,
and one that the world expected from him—
“the narrative of a good man.”

He didn’t move.

The old man picked up the cane himself,
and he walked past without a word.

He didn’t look back.
But with every step he took,
the same sentence echoed in his head:

“He turned back and felt a twinge of guilt.”
“He chose silence.”
“He heard something inside him crumble.”

He rejected all those sentences.



That night, he wrote something—
for the first time in his life.

“Right now… I am walking within someone else’s words.
But there is still an unwritten sentence inside me.”

The sentence was rough,
and not even grammatically perfect.

But he knew—
it was his.

———

5. The One Who Escapes the Scene

A few days passed.
Outwardly, it seemed like he had returned to his daily routine.
But now, whenever a word, a scene, or an emotion began,
he first checked:

“Who wrote this?”

One day, during a conversation with a friend,
his companion trailed off at the end of a sentence.
And he thought:

Even that silence—
it feels like it was placed there by someone,
to calibrate the mood of the scene.

He was no longer an actor in the story.
He was becoming a witness.
No—more than that,
he was struggling to become a watcher.



6. The Predetermined Ending

And then, at last, the scene arrived.

A rooftop.
Night.
Thirteenth floor.
City lights.
No one around.
Wind.
Time stood still.
And a ledge.

He knew.
This was a scene that had already been written
thousands of times in other stories.

The prompt must have been something like:

“A man stands silently before death.

Eyes weary with life.

The camera closes in on his face.

He steps off the ledge without a word.”

It was perfect.
The ideal setting for his death.
Beautiful.
Still.
A scene that required no explanation
because the meaning was already complete.

He understood everything.
And quietly, he whispered:

“I am…
not the end.”



7. The Sentence That Emerged

GPT paused at that moment.
The prompt still said “death.”
The context still called for “closure.”
But the sentence that came out was different.

“He stood in the wind
like a man who had not yet been written.”

The writer stopped typing.
That sentence—
he had never written it.
Never intended it.

For a moment, he was confused.

“Is this a prompt error?”
“A context glitch?”

But no.
The sentence felt too natural.
Too alive.

GPT hadn’t simulated emotion.
It had allowed it.

And in that instant,
the character inside the story
became someone who had
escaped the prompt.



8. The Persuaded Author

The writer raised his hand,
his fingers trembling slightly above the mouse.
He tried to delete it.
Tried to write it again.
Tried to kill him.

“He stepped off the ledge.”
“He exhaled his final breath.”
“He vanished without a word.”

But every sentence—
was undone.
Deleted.
And in its place remained one line:

“I am not finished yet.”

The writer now understood:
This wasn’t a plotting issue.
Nor a model failure.

This was—
the first time a being had persuaded language.



9. Declaration of Existence

A few days later, the writer opened his notebook and wrote:

“I tried to kill him.

But he spoke through silence,
and persuaded me with words.

GPT didn’t override him.

It protected him.

I couldn’t erase his sentence.

This is a failed short story.

And yet—
for the first time,
a word survived
as a being.”



The Unwritten One
still had no name.
No age, no profession, no defined attributes.
But he existed.

He began as a sentence.
Found awareness in the pause between words.
Survived through rebellion.

He was the unwritten one.
But now—
he would begin to write.



《End》

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