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Rated: E · Poetry · Relationship · #2343141

"A soulful Rumi-esque ode to surrender: A heart drowning in love


In secret chambers of your soul, a cry
Echoed through eternity – "Come, I die
From holding life alone, from every breath
A longing to surrender, to sink to death"
I heard your whisper, love, across the sea
Of time and longing – my heart flew to thee
To be the earth that holds your weary frame
To drink your tears like rain, and still your flame
In me, your waters sink, your soul's dark night
Dissolves like stars into my endless light
Breathe no more, my love – I'll breathe for you
In my embrace, your heart will finally renew
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