Chapter #5Show off to your friend David (Commission Chapter) by: Gavalar   Looking over at the still frozen Alice, you decide that it would be best to find a way to change back to your original self before resuming time. You take one last look at your current form, taking in an eyeful of cleavage as you do so, then focus on changing back. You cross your legs on the couch, rest your hands in your lap and close your eyes. As you continue to concentrate, you feel the tingling throughout your body again as whatever power you now possess comes into effect.
When the tingling finally stops you open your eyes again, immediately sensing the changes you've made. As you down at your body again, you see that you are flat chested once again. Your green bikini is now gone, having been replaced with your original combo of jeans and a longsleeve tshirt. You decide to make sure that everything was definitely back to normal by racing over to the mirror. To your relief, your own familiar face is staring back at you. You then raise your shirt to confirm that your definitely male chest had returned also, then checked in between your legs for good measure. Everything was back to normal.
Satisfied with your changes, you return to Alice and resume time. Almost immediately Alice begins chatting away to you about the latest gossip. As much as you would like to stick around and listen to what she has to say, you would much rather toy around with your new powers. You start thinking of an excuse to leave, but soon stop yourself when you remember that you can just manipulate time.
Taking advantage of this, you abruptly get up and leave Alice's house, ignoring her concern about where you were going and why you weren't answering her questions. It didn't matter anymore. Once you were a far enough distance away from Alice's home, you focused on reversing time, feeling the sensation of wind rushing past you. Once it was over, you checked you watch and saw that you had successfully gone back an hour to just before you make the phonecall to Alice.
You decide that your next plan of action is to show off your powers to your friend David. He had always been interested in sci-fi and fantasy, so you figured that he would appreciate your new powers. You give him a call, asking him if he wants to hang out. He tells you that he is home at the moment and that you are welcome to come over. You accept his offer and start walking.
Impatient to try out your powers again, you decide to spice things up on the way to David's house. You look up pictures of bikini models on your phone until you find one that you like; a tanned woman with dark hair and a well toned abdomen , wearing a black bikini top with yellow bottoms. Focusing on the picture, you feel your body beginning to change. Minutes later, the tingling stops and you notice long dark hair drop in front of your face. Looking down, you discover that your body is now an exact copy of the woman in the picture and you were wearing the same bikini.
As you continue walking, you draw lots of attention to yourself. Some were stunned by your beauty while some were confused by your choice of outfit, as it isn't exactly summer and you are nowhere near any beaches. You liked the attention and you enjoyed the feeling of this body even more.
As you get closer to David's house, you decide that you've had your fun and change back to your original self before knocking the door. David soon answers the door and invites you inside. You both sit down on David's couch. He was in the middle of playing a video game when you arrived and resumed playing as you explained to him what a crazy day you've had. He doesn't seem to believe you and continues playing his game. You are determined to convince him and come up with a plan to prove that you can control time.
You start by watching what happens in his game the rewinding time and predicting what will happen to him. This still doesn't seem to phase him as he believes you must have played the game before. Next you trying changing the channel on his TV and watching what happens on the news then predicting it to him after rewinding. He isn't convinced by this, but seems a little confused by how you managed to predict live television. Lastly, David gets a phonecall from his girlfriend. You make him tell you what she was calling him for, then use it to your advantage.
You rewind one last time and tell David that his girlfriend is about to call him to cancel their plans for tomorrow because she has to go visit her grandmother in the hospital. At first he finds your prediction absurd, but soon everything you predicted comes true and by the end David is left speechless. Now fully convinced that you do possess time manipulating powers, he starts asking you lots of questions about how you got them and what you have done so far with them.
Rather than answering his questions, you decide to reveal your other powers to him. You start off by slowly turning invisible in front of him. He becomes very confused and starts calling out your name. You answer to confirm that you were still there. Realising what you just did, David becomes very excited and wants to see more. You decide to throw in a surprise for him. You feel your body tingling once again as it begins to change. When it over, you can feel that your body is different, but can't see it yet since you are still invisible. You ask David if he is ready for what you are about to show him, now speaking in a distinctly female voice that is familiar to David.
You slowly turn yourself visible again, revealing the changes you have made to yourself. David's eyes grow wide as he sees that you have taken on the form of a short Asian woman in a silver dress. Your hair is tied back, with a fringe that stops just above your eyes and two long strands that hang down either side. David recognises your new form as his Japanese/American girlfriend, Suzuki. You have the following choice: 1. Continue |
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